Nov 25, 2008

A Normal Tale


I've tried to narrate one of the very normal phases everyone goes through during some time of their relationships - A tough time.

Edit : I posted the poem with a pic between each stanza, but the poem lost its charm with too many pics. So intially the whole poem is given, and later on the picture version is posted. 

Here I wanna devote you a Poem,
To let you know the feeling that's being woven.
Every time we love each other, the feelings get immense,
Then comes a phase which makes us both tense.
We annoy, we irritate, we shout, we blame,
We find each other's words real lame.
More frustration, more detachment, it seems like an end, 
Lemme tell you my boy, after all love is a blend.
This only brings us a new insight, which we failed to see,
And gets us closer more than we could ever be.
And this was not the last such phase, if at all you're mistaken,
Solving fights are far more better than the hearts getting broken.
So next time when this phase passes you by,
Be positive, open up your mind and don't be shy.
Understand your partner, soothe, console, show that you care,
It will surely work and your bonding will glare.
So I'm winding this up, and I adore you my dove,
You'll always have my smile, kisses, hugs and love.



"A picture version"

Here I wanna devote you a Poem,
To let you know the feeling that's being woven.


Every time we love each other, the feelings get immense,
Then comes a phase which makes us both tense.



We annoy, we irritate, we shout, we blame,
We find each other's words real lame.

More frustration, more detachment, it seems like an end, 
Lemme tell you my boy, after all love is a blend.


This only brings us a new insight, which we failed to see,
And gets us closer more than we could ever be.


And this was not the last such phase, if at all you're mistaken,
Solving fights are far more better than the hearts getting broken.


So next time when this phase passes you by,
Be positive, open up your mind and don't be shy.



Understand your partner, soothe, console, show that you care,
It will surely work and your bonding will glare.



So I'm winding this up, and I adore you my dove,
You'll always have my smile, kisses, hugs and love.







This is just my humble effort to put up things the way I see them. I would surely like to know your opinions about relationships. Kindly drop in. - Phoenix

10 comments:

Gubbi said...

Very true !!

Nice selection of pictures as usual.

Loved the opening and closing lines especially.

I haven't been through any "relationships" as such, but I guess we come to know more about a person by friction just like by agreement. One can't be realistic and expect all friction to vanish away.


This only brings us a new insight, which we failed to see,
And gets us closer more than we could ever be.


:) Awesome two lines.

Anonymous said...

Aah!just the Right Thing you said.It's complicated even when there's nothing wrong..:)

"Solving fights are far more better than the hearts getting broken."

Lovely.Keep it up!

See Bee said...

this is beautiful! i think you have summed it up very well, and agre with most of what you ahve said

only sutimes i wonder, is staying together 'easier' than walking out?

just wondering....

Phoenix said...

gubbi : thank you. 'we come to know more about a person by friction just like by agreement' I agree.

anonymity : Hey, guess what? you've written a nice comment, u dun need to be an anonymous entity. anyway thanks.

trauma queen : Thank you :) it brought me a smile. And about staying together or walking out.. depends upon your priorities, your expectations, your stability. Consider both the sides. Have a safe move. :) Peace.

broca's area said...

i really believe in communication...just sit and talk
or else write in a paper and convey ur message....it works out pretty well!!

Anonymous said...

I wanted to say the "too many pics killing the charm" thing but i was too afraid to tell you that because its just a blog. :)

Btw why did you remove that??It was so cute.

Phoenix said...

brocasarea : I too agree to that, but it's quite not possible to do so everytime. And after crossing certain level of anger, you just burst. you dont have any sense left to write anything. thanks for droppin in regularly.

anonymity : umm.. thanks for being so considerate. by the way i realise it on my own. so thats ok. and i removed it bcz i didnt find it cute. :)

Scarlet said...

You brought relationships to life with this poem and a fitting selection of photos.

Love is complicated...with its ups and downs, feelings of euphoria and melancholy, and it's so worth the effort.

If you can stick it out, make it through the rough patches, eventually you will experience a deeper, stronger and more perfect love, a mature, unconditional acceptance and understanding of another human being.

Love with all its mysteries and complications is beautiful. There's no life without love.

Phenomenal poem, Phoenix. I think we can all relate to it.

Phoenix said...

scarlet : I totally agree wid whatever you've said. May be i'm yet to experience certain things, rather m yet to experience them as deeply as you have. But still i can feel what you're saying :) It's like a wine. Gets better with time.
And thanks a lot for your appreciation. It encourages me :) Love.

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